Hey Everybody! I wanted to share another chapter of another book I am writing. Oh, and I will be posting another post of my horse book, if you have not seen the first chapter then click HERE to go and read it! Ok, so here is the 2nd chapter of the horse book witch I think I am going to call it "Sidera" for now.
Chapter 2:
My new friend
A few days passed and I am stronger and I can
run.
“Today is special”
mother said. “How?” I asked. “Because today you get to explore” she replied with
a happy voice, “Explore?” I asked “Yes you get to play and meet other foals” she
said . “Oh, I get to finally play with other foals!” I said with my voice so
happy. Just then a *click, click* was herd. “People? Is it the people going to
let us out to explore?” I asked with my ears perking up. “Yes, it is, darling”
she said with joy. Then the door opened and the nice boy came in and put the
thing on mother again. He walked her out of the barn while I followed. We walked
until we came to a big fenced in field. There were other foals and horses there!
Mother was right! I was so excited I jumped and I whinnied. When he opened the
gate I ran though. And he let mother go with the other horses. I was having fun
already I ran past the other foals I whinnied to, as the whinnied back to me.
Mother stood there for a while watching me run and leap. Then she started to
trot then canter then she ran to me. I was outrunning her easily. I finally came
to a big hill, I went on the other side of it. It was so quiet, there. I looked
around me, I could no longer see mother. So I started to explore the tall grass.
I even tasted some. It tasted weird. It didn’t taste like mother’s
warm milk. I trotted into the tall grass some more. Something or someone was
moving in the grass. “Hello?” I said, hoping for an answer. “Arrff!” I loud
noise came back at me.
I started to walk
towards it. There was only one of them. I didn’t know what or who they were.
“Hi! Do ya wanna play with me?” it asked. It came up to me, and then it licked
me. I stomped and took a few steps back. “Do you you wanna be my friend?” it
asked. I stood there waiting for my reply. “Friend?” I said. “Do you?” it asked
again. “Ok!” I finally replied. “What are you?” I asked “I’m a filly” I waited
for it’s reply, “Oh, I’m a young dog, and my name is, Posie” it replied. “My
name is, Siddera” I said. Just then mother came trotting down the hill. “Mother
see my new friend?” I asked her with a happy voice. “Yes, darling. I do see” she
replied, “We need to go with the other horses now” she said. “Ok” I said “Oh can
you come with us?” I asked, Posie."Ok, I guess. Are there other ones of your kind there?" Posie asked waging her tail. "Yes there are" mother answered for me.
And here is the 1st chapter of my other book, The Four Treasure Hunters:
Chapter 1:
Sir. Baldwin
On
a cool and sunny day, four girls are playing at their creek. They
called the creek, Crayfish Creek, because the creek was filled with
crayfish. “Moira! Come quick! I see a crayfish! Come on, come on,
it's going to get away” The ten year old girl named, Flannery
yelled to her sister on the other side of the creek. The four girls
all loved to catch the crayfish and let them go after they did. But
it was rare to catch crayfish, because the crayfish were fast and
hard to catch. The twelve year old girl, Moira came with a bucket as
fast as she could. “Were is it?” Moira asked. “It was right
there” Flannery said, pointing in front of a small hole in the sand
“Well it must have gone in the hole”. “Yeah, it must have”
Moira said going to another part of the creek.
"Oh,
Flannery! I see another one! Come quick with that bucket over there!
I don't want to loose this one” Moira yelled out to, Flannery, as,
Flannery ran at top speed over to her with the crayfish bucket, she
handed the crayfish bucket to, Moira. “It's huge!! Ok, now
becareful it might pinch you” Said, Flannery whispering in her ear.
“I know that. Why do you think I am doing this with a bucket not my
hands!” Moira said. “I was just...wait were is older sis and
younger sis?” Flannery asked. “I think they went up to the house”
Moira replied. “Ok, now what do we name him?” Flannery asked with
a thinking pose. “How about...Arthur!” Moira suggested. “Arthur?
What are you thinking? That is not a proper name at all! We need to
name him something nice. Besides I hate the name, Arthur” Flannery
said. “Ok, so what do you want to name him?” Moira asked.
“Ummmm...how about...Sir. Baldwin! That's more proper then, Arthur”
Flannery said “I like it so I'm gonna call him that”. “Ok then
we will name him, Sir. Baldwin” Moira said.
*Ding-a-ling-a-ding*!!!! their
mother had called them in for lunch.
"COMING!!!!!!!!”
both the girls called to their mother. And they went up to the house
to eat.
Please comment and tell me what you think!

I love it! I like the first chapter, best, though.
ReplyDeleteWill you post the third chapter? If you do, I will copy it at the library and read it all the time!
-Delena
Ok, then I guess I will be writing the third chapter :). Thanks!
ReplyDelete-Flannery
I really like this!! Please write another chapter if you haven't already. And the other one about the crayfish is also really good! I can't wait to find another chapter for both of them!!!
ReplyDeleteFrom Pipi (not the goat. The girl who lives in Queensland Australia haha)